Score: 4

"Good concept, good script."

submission: COGS OF WAR 2

date: July 3, 2009

BUT, your voice acting is almost fucking unbearable to listen too. You really need to fix that, your voice I mean.

Score: 1

"What the fuck is this shit?"

submission: RIP Michael Jackson

date: June 27, 2009

When Michael Jackson dies you have a tribute to him, when David Carradine dies you have a thing mocking him and the way he dies the day after. Newgrounds is becoming fucking retarded.

Score: 4

"Very Poor."

submission: MovieMakers

date: April 20, 2009

People on Newgrounds unfortunately find it very easy to mistake good comedy with brilliant animation and direction. You must remember at all times that writing is about 90% of a comedy animation, if not more, and no ammount of brilliance in other aspects is going to change that fact. The terrible voice acting doesn't help either. But, as I say, brilliant animation, opening credits and everything else. Just don't do anything next time unless you are absolutely sure the script is worth the effort - lame jokes ripping off the styles of the simpsons, family guy, etc, have no place here - you need originality. Good luck, and you're animation is great - that's what the points are for - that alone.