Score: 4

"Good concept, good script."

submission: COGS OF WAR 2

date: July 3, 2009

BUT, your voice acting is almost fucking unbearable to listen too. You really need to fix that, your voice I mean.

Score: 1

"What the fuck is this shit?"

submission: RIP Michael Jackson

date: June 27, 2009

When Michael Jackson dies you have a tribute to him, when David Carradine dies you have a thing mocking him and the way he dies the day after. Newgrounds is becoming fucking retarded.

Score: 4

"Very Poor."

submission: MovieMakers

date: April 20, 2009

People on Newgrounds unfortunately find it very easy to mistake good comedy with brilliant animation and direction. You must remember at all times that writing is about 90% of a comedy animation, if not more, and no ammount of brilliance in other aspects is going to change that fact. The terrible voice acting doesn't help either. But, as I say, brilliant animation, opening credits and everything else. Just don't do anything next time unless you are absolutely sure the script is worth the effort - lame jokes ripping off the styles of the simpsons, family guy, etc, have no place here - you need originality. Good luck, and you're animation is great - that's what the points are for - that alone.

Score: 2

"Not funny."

submission: Weebl & Bob : Armagooden

date: April 17, 2009

And terrible, terrible voice acting - it almost makes it awkward to watch.
Not good at all.
You're talented, though; the Gordon Brown thing was genius.
The stars are for the animation only - that and the effort.

Score: 8

"Nicely Made, but..."

submission: :the Composer:

date: April 17, 2009

Personally I found the concept a little melodramatic and over sentimental. I feel that if this had been done in a film, with live action, that it would be considered cheesey, and I think people think it's different, being an animation. However, the music was very good, the animation was superb, and everything else - direction, composition, etc, was done fantastically. So well done; you should be very happy with it.

Score: 10

"Excellent."

submission: These Pancakes Are Tiny

date: December 8, 2008

The animation in this cartoon wasn't only good, but television worthy... shit, even film worthy. D Note is right - if i saw this on TV as part of [adult swim] or some other cartoon dedicated channel or segment, I wouldn't be surprised in the slightest. The attention to detail in your animation is beautiful, and the fact you did needless things - throwing the keys in the air - turned the whole thing from very good into incredible. I'm sure you're probably very busy - especially after this animation - but i'm a writer in the UK, currently working on the English magazines, 'Blue Moon' and 'The Deal'. I've recently been writing scripts for cartoons; if you're interested in seeing any of my work and considering a colaberation, then e-mail me at stuartrust91@hotmail.com. Once again, brilliant cartoon.